Warning: Emo elements present, cheesy, , tissue paper -should –come- handy kinda stuff, ADHD symptoms towards the end, logophobics are highly undesired.
LOST
Here they lay me down to sleep
For another thousand years I weep
Autumn leaves, my bed you be
People and places I know not thee...
Dead and gone that's what I may be
For I wasn't what they chose to see,For another thousand years I weep
Autumn leaves, my bed you be
People and places I know not thee...
Dead and gone that's what I may be
Frozen hands that I cannot feel
But my heart still pounds, as it bleed...
Sun and the moon dance around me
Know I not what tomorrows may be .
for a better vision of my (when pride takes control....) poem: this is what i had in mind (something like this)
Newsflash: Shakespeare just died ( like he was alive yesterday)
for a better vision of my (when pride takes control....) poem: this is what i had in mind (something like this)
the important thing to remember is: it has got nothing to do with :
HONEY, NOT this. =p |
I wept...I bled...I died...yet I'm alive. Where is the beginning and where is the end? I know not thee. (actually i feel kinda funny reading the poem, but who cares!)
F.Y.I
Actually that was like a few months ago. If I’m not mistaken, it is supposed to be my 2nd attempt on writing poems. I finished like half of it and saved it and today when I was looking for a doc on child development, holla it was right there winking at me. no choice but to oblige its demands *angel-mode*. I sat down about 30 minutes to finish the last 4 lines of the so-called poem. No joke! I take a very long time to start and finish a poem. I write like 1 or 2 lines per day and skipping happens A LOTTTT. It requires a lot of brain juice and word matching games! Hope the poem makes sense. It is kind of a –little- too- emo type though. Will try on some happy ones soon k? Good Night =)
None other than *drum rolls*
Renuka G
1 comments:
Wow ! U got a super heart,U mean it bleeded ? Then it pounded too ? OMG what a heart !!Of all the ediots the sun and moon danced with u ?! I told u dont trust these two fellas,one sneaks in the day and the other at nighT!!Good attempt,keep it up!
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